is the entire thing your resume or is the red background for presentation? I'll just randomly plop down some constructive criticism.

It shouldn't include the red background, even though the face is very nice, it leaves it unprofessional.

I love the layout, I love the color palette. I debate whether I think the bottom identity section should be rag left or rag right.

The italicized is COMPLETELY unnecessary with the color red, italics are gross, and because it's red it obviously sticks out enough.

I think your hierarchy of type is terrible confusing, I read the right first, which may be your intention for each section, but makes no sense to read as is. Also your heading for each (btw the employments word gets real weird around the y and m for some reason) they're all different transparencies, why would you do that?

I think it could do without the colons by the years, or maybe try to figure out a different symbol for it. A type trick for that is to align the font, to your right in this case, and actually push the colon (or comma or semicolon, etc.) over the edge of the type alignment, just a wee bit mind.

A font that would be much more successful is Univers light, thicker bolder fonts make for clutter, if that's your intention you need to make sure everyone can notice that.

Designs need to be simple, light, minimalistic, it needs to give people vision space. You've done very very well with the idea. Ultimately I think if you changed all the font to univers light, kept all the colour, unified the transparancy, took out the red background, used a thicker univers for the headings, it would be beautiful!

Just my thoughts on it

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whoa... that was nnniiice! i never got such critism for any of my work.. and this! for my own resume! wow.. no no no dont take this as sarcasm but i really appreciate the changes you recommended... will reappear with my updated version soon!